tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post480400160668749855..comments2024-03-22T10:51:23.567-05:00Comments on Faith, Fiction, Friends: VespersGlynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-91861612607203504502011-08-24T20:13:41.640-05:002011-08-24T20:13:41.640-05:00So beautiful and reverent. I've never been ar...So beautiful and reverent. I've never been around or experienced quiet prayer like this. It must be so amazing. Maybe I can try this.Karen Kyle Ericsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519939237365240288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-12366649005423961832011-08-24T18:16:56.372-05:002011-08-24T18:16:56.372-05:00Really well done with the loop effect of your refr...Really well done with the loop effect of your refrain, I also felt this spoke to the dogma routine that can actually take us out of our own existence. Well written piece ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-74390501405004399492011-08-24T18:09:34.814-05:002011-08-24T18:09:34.814-05:00Sweet! I have played in the past with something si...Sweet! I have played in the past with something similar to this. I think you've done it beautifully. A lovely feeling of peace pervades this poem.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-69399517597770558112011-08-23T21:59:52.813-05:002011-08-23T21:59:52.813-05:00Glynn, loved the form you create here, the repetit...Glynn, loved the form you create here, the repetition of a word at the end of a thought and starting the next gives this flow, rhythm and a sort of looping rhyme bring everything round right! Excellent.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-23480923283164598162011-08-23T21:56:31.344-05:002011-08-23T21:56:31.344-05:00Phrase ending/beginnings made me ponder and pause....Phrase ending/beginnings made me ponder and pause...love the feel of this and the exquisite image match.Conniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06055245047864169568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-33206659973767574362011-08-23T21:33:49.263-05:002011-08-23T21:33:49.263-05:00love the form and piclove the form and picAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-71777602357593304122011-08-23T20:34:52.384-05:002011-08-23T20:34:52.384-05:00Beautifully hushed Glynn! Not sure what this kind ...Beautifully hushed Glynn! Not sure what this kind of poem is called, but I love the way the words seep into the next line as if winding a blanket around the reader before rest. Lovely...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922760815882403820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-85081697723139114612011-08-23T20:21:30.660-05:002011-08-23T20:21:30.660-05:00It was like each word was connected in a chain of ...It was like each word was connected in a chain of the day and night.<br /><br />Very nice poem ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-68304389470582193152011-08-23T16:24:27.116-05:002011-08-23T16:24:27.116-05:00Beautiful...just beautiful...Beautiful...just beautiful...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866639097998917122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-59730904099593360912011-08-23T15:58:59.627-05:002011-08-23T15:58:59.627-05:00As I read, I wanted to say what J. said, but I did...As I read, I wanted to say what J. said, but I didn't know how. <br /><br />Beautiful.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-80449750541232873642011-08-23T15:54:39.974-05:002011-08-23T15:54:39.974-05:00love the repetition, lovely write.love the repetition, lovely write.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-35390838750700554622011-08-23T15:26:38.232-05:002011-08-23T15:26:38.232-05:00Love how you played the same word off of one anoth...Love how you played the same word off of one another. Wonderful write, as always!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-10793504026905147972011-08-23T14:58:57.377-05:002011-08-23T14:58:57.377-05:00The chained words and domino-effect repetition wor...The chained words and domino-effect repetition work well here to replicate the power(and seductive beauty) of ritual.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-75308997564049211832011-08-23T14:32:16.171-05:002011-08-23T14:32:16.171-05:00I agree with all that's been said so far... a ...I agree with all that's been said so far... a beautiful celebration, indeed!<br /><br />http://lkkolp.wordpress.com/2011/08/23/pow/Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-28459684512932142062011-08-23T12:28:41.577-05:002011-08-23T12:28:41.577-05:00nice...the wrap of your words one line to the next...nice...the wrap of your words one line to the next is very effective in this glynn...soothing and meditative..very nicely done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-14811876750453378862011-08-23T12:03:01.756-05:002011-08-23T12:03:01.756-05:00I so love Evenprayer and Compline. This poem works...I so love Evenprayer and Compline. This poem works for either... very beautiful, Glynn.Valerie Kamikubohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12864824409136614469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-21682906038339057292011-08-23T11:23:03.423-05:002011-08-23T11:23:03.423-05:00Fantastic write! love the word play and repetition...Fantastic write! love the word play and repetition throughout, lending strength and drama to the piece. And the photo is stunning!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-24655886871877643802011-08-23T11:09:18.262-05:002011-08-23T11:09:18.262-05:00And so we come to evensong.
Your "spirit / ...And so we come to evensong. <br /><br />Your "spirit / arrives at the destined time" stands out for me, signifying both its counted-on presence and our confidence in knowing we'll find its consolation at the appointed hour.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-88073543940733389392011-08-23T11:04:07.328-05:002011-08-23T11:04:07.328-05:00Ooo...loved this, Glynn! The mind of a poet always...Ooo...loved this, Glynn! The mind of a poet always amazes me! Blessings for a continued amazing mind!lynnmosherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05150393635514942267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-88367380364608853212011-08-23T11:03:23.416-05:002011-08-23T11:03:23.416-05:00The rhythmic linking of your poem's lines seem...The rhythmic linking of your poem's lines seem to reflect the gentle bonds which join the liturgies of the hours..JofIndiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05091187070268922483noreply@blogger.com