tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post681653809918743630..comments2024-03-17T14:36:17.252-05:00Comments on Faith, Fiction, Friends: The Theology of PuddlesGlynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-7926761681101467302013-06-16T19:27:36.083-05:002013-06-16T19:27:36.083-05:00Balanced so well on this middle line:
"as it...Balanced so well on this middle line:<br /><br />"as it reflects upon its short life,"<br /><br />A lovely write.<br /><br />~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-89903868794717290242013-06-16T16:30:16.223-05:002013-06-16T16:30:16.223-05:00Such a picture. Thank you!Such a picture. Thank you!dianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11991172981000479793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-84267520044324806822013-06-16T14:54:46.416-05:002013-06-16T14:54:46.416-05:00what a way
to go
in a shooting
flying
arc of play
...what a way<br />to go<br />in a shooting<br />flying<br />arc of play<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-44822120006202750452013-06-16T13:45:55.927-05:002013-06-16T13:45:55.927-05:00love the use of the mud puddle, very much an excel...love the use of the mud puddle, very much an excellent imagery and metaphor in itself, the three year old boy adds a ton of depth to the piece as well. Great write Glynn. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-83861806672504016592013-06-16T13:33:19.907-05:002013-06-16T13:33:19.907-05:00love how it builds up to the last line... and that...love how it builds up to the last line... and that final line just makes you go 'awww'.<br />beautifully done!<br />~MiriamAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-81806247727335393342013-06-16T12:30:02.558-05:002013-06-16T12:30:02.558-05:003 year old? i still turn into one when i see puddl...3 year old? i still turn into one when i see puddles. such fun :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-35630648694684350942013-06-16T11:13:37.752-05:002013-06-16T11:13:37.752-05:00Puddles for a 3-year is true beauty... and the mud...Puddles for a 3-year is true beauty... and the muddier the better. Like the changed POV. and the title just brilliant.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791261486111154318.post-14223171383022219282013-06-16T09:17:44.079-05:002013-06-16T09:17:44.079-05:00ha and i imagine it finds no little joy in the squ...ha and i imagine it finds no little joy in the squeeel and titter as the boy runs on, carrying a little bit of it on his ankles...smiles...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com