Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Watching Water


There is something
calming about watching
water with its algae-emerald
cast and so clear that
you see clusters of
dogpaddling turtles
circling each other with
no particular purpose
except to circle, then
gliding off in search of
new meanders; catfish
so large they look like
those prehistoric fish
netted up by
Japanese whalers; and
flows of wind sheening
across the surface
like silver knives.


Poem composed 10/2/10 on the balcony of the Great Room at Laity Lodge, near Kerrville, Texas. Submitted for One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry.

Photograph: The Frio River, taken from the Circuit Bluff Trail, Laity Lodge, courtesy of my cell phone.

41 comments:

  1. Ah, thanks for this. Felt like I was sitting there looking out at the same beautiful scene. Of course, I was throwing rocks into the water, but I've had too many low carb monsters today.

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  2. You have a great way with words, Glynn. Enjoyed the flow of the descriptions. Cool photo too.

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  3. Glynn, you are like my writing mentor. You truly inspire me. Thank you.

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  4. Nature in all its wondrous beauty...the last line sings!

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  5. I too love watching water, especially the ocean.

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  6. too beautiful..flowing with the peaceful feeling of the well captured scene..:)

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  7. I like the turtles whose purpose is to circle, the prehistoric fish, and the waves like knives.

    I regret that we never went canoeing together!

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  8. How can I resist a poem that offers up "dogpaddling turtles"? I can't. Nice!

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  9. Enjoyable use of metaphor. Very cool poem.

    crb.

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  10. I can picture it now... Thanks for the word picture.

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  11. "...flows of wind sheening/...like silver knives": What a marvelous image!

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  12. turtles and fishes ... super like that :)) You drew a good image here !

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  13. nice. i like the contrast between the serenity and the knives in the end...great one shot!

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  14. To close ones eyes and see the image through words is the ultimate compliment I can give to a writer. Your words draw that picture. Here is my contribution to One Shot this week - The Touch.

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  15. I could have watched those turtles all day. Thanks for this snapshot, Glynn. I think I'll keep it with me.

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  16. There is something magical about water, and you've certainly captured that Glynn. The sights, the sounds - so peaceful.

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  17. Glyn you have captured the depths of the water so well that I almost scuba dived in it with your words.. thanks for sharing..

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  18. Yes. Water. Love the last line. I'll be looking for the silver knives the next time wind is over the water.

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  19. We know the same waters. Your images as clear as the sealife you describe stand as powerful metaphors. Well written. Thank you, Gay @beachanny

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  20. Your silver knives... cut me right through.
    This, Glynn... this.

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  21. Splendid imagery...a joy to visualize...outstanding.

    Cheers!

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  22. A serene reflection. Thank you :O)

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  23. Nothing like an interesting view to inspire one's words.

    Nice One Shot, Glynn!

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  24. Beautiful, both poem and photograph. Love the image of the turtles circling........very lovely.

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  25. I liked this, but the first line was flawed. You need to find a different way to open the incantation.

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  26. i was pulled from the start....a great write glynn and loved the photo too...hope all is well my friend, cheers pete

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  27. Great imagery, especially the close,

    "flows of wind sheening
    across the surface
    like silver knives."

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  28. I find water to be so calming and you invited me in to the depths of my own peaceful place through your words and image! Fab one shot!

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  29. flows of wind sheening
    across the surface
    like silver knives - just lovely and completes it.

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  30. Solid on the visual front, relatable; familiar but well-written.

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  31. your right it is veary calming usually i go into daydream :)
    great oneshot!!!!

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  32. Loved the word flow so much..great oneshot my friend xx

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  33. Peaceful read and beautiful all round Glynn.

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  34. So peaceful, so restful. Nice One Shot!
    -C

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