Tuesday, November 9, 2010
A Most Perfect Shell
In late afternoon chill,
he faces a dying sun,
abandoned by its oiled
and lotioned congregation.
The clouds refract the
light through dust,
radiating yellows, paling;
oranges fading, pink;
blues turning, gray.
The sand is cool on
his feet, now.
He and the boy had
searched for shells and
found a few for a slight
memory but nothing
of much consequence
except they found them
together, all they had now.
He squats to scoop sand
with his hands, the slender,
masculine fingers funneling
the grains away. He scoops
again and sees a glimmer,
half of three quarters hidden,
a reflection of color and form.
Dusting the sand away he sees
a most perfect shell,
abandoned by some mollusk
fleeing the beauty of its
house, the shell he and
the boy had sought.
Standing, he arcs the shell
into the surging waves.
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Photograph: Pacific Sunset by Andrew Schmidt via Public Domain Pictures. Used with permission.
sending it back from where it came
ReplyDeletei like
half of three quarters hidden
"he scoops again"
ReplyDeleteI liked that.
The ending felt very sad to me.
yes, a sadness lingers ...
ReplyDeleteoh yeah i feel the sadness...and wishing perhaps for another chance...with his boy. nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteOh wow. I hope you know how much I love your writings.
ReplyDeletethere is something so bonding about seashell hunting. This quest must continue I think for the man
ReplyDeletewhat a wonderful poem to ponder to the depths
Thanks for the One Shot
Moon smiles
Strong writing. I waded yet felt pulled through the writing, and then the lovely arc of the shell at the end. Great!
ReplyDeleteA bonding moment with a tinge of sadness.I always love to connect visual with words.And I totally love the one you used.Like a taste of what is coming when I saw it.
ReplyDeleteAlways a joy to discover a treasure.A great one shot!
This is beautiful Glynn...:-)
ReplyDeleteI'm a fan of beach-combing (something I don't get to indulge in often enough) so this really resonated with me. I loved "oiled and lotioned congregation" as a term for 'sun worshippers' - very apt!
ReplyDeleteI didn't see the sadness - I saw the circle of life - from the sea it came and to it returned - the beauty, the perfection, the joy and in time always so fleeting; just capture the moment..that's how I unfolded it today. Beautiful Glynn
ReplyDeleteDear Glynn
ReplyDeleteIts very interesting verse.. I enjoyed the way you have portrayed your thoughts... here.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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i leave near the coast and love spending time with the kids beachcombing...i love the passing of time.....and to return the shell...for others to discover...cheers pete
ReplyDeletefor all the poetry i write...o cant even spell the word live....it should have said i live near the coast....oh well...cheers pete
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