The photographer
arranged us just so,
seated on the coffee
table with a soft white
screen as backdrop.
We’re smiling, or course,
that’s what you do
in pictures, you smile.
And we each wear white.
You’re in the middle,
all of 34 years old
with the towhead son
on your right and the
redhead son on your left.
I look at the photo now
and think she’s beautiful,
with those cheekbones
and narrow face and
those smiling eyes still
full of dreams and life
and laughter. And now
when we talk a half
century later you
still end the conversation
every time with
I love you.
My mother still has this photo, placed in a big leather-bound family photo album, or else I’d include it here. Five years later, the third son came along.
This poem is submitted for One Shot Sunday, hosted by One Stop Poetry. Instead of a photo prompt, this edition of One Shot Sunday has Mother’s Day as the prompt. To see more poems, please visit the site.
ah, I love the detail in this... could almost see that picture as I read it.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem!
Simply divine. I love ... the love in this.
ReplyDeleteJust what I've always come to expect when I drop by.
aw, lovely. My mom always ends with an I love you, too...
ReplyDeletePicture set perfectly in this piece, A beautiful expression of the memory. ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteBeautifully shared... love the detailed image.
ReplyDeleteSweet little snap shot of your life. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteEnding conversations with I love you
ReplyDeletethat is richness
All mothers have their own beauty, especially our own.
ReplyDeletesmiles. nice perspective glynn, through the picture...and my mom too always ends the convo with i love you
ReplyDeleteaww - this is beautiful glynn...esp. love the..smiling eyes still
ReplyDeletefull of dreams and life
and laughter.. and what a perfect way to end a conversation..
Lovely... I always end the conversation with," I love you".
ReplyDeleteYou made that picture so vivid for all of us...
ReplyDeletelet it be forever
Glynn you have an amazing talent with words! Beautiful story!
ReplyDeleteI love everything about this poem - from the title to the last line. Precious moments immortalized with a poet's eye.
ReplyDeleteAnd she always will. You capture the essence of who each person in that photo really was, looking back. We seldom see our parents as being as young and vulnerable as ourselves, or the young face inside the old one.
ReplyDelete"Love you!" Beautifully done...
ReplyDeletegood good good
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful Glynn, I think we all have a stock of similar photographs that remind us of our mothers
ReplyDeleteAnd we know how you answer her back.
ReplyDeleteperfect ending!!!!
ReplyDeletevivid description
ReplyDeleteSo sweet, Glynn. And what a lovely tribute to your loving mom.
ReplyDeleteWonderful work, great cap-line.
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