Saturday, August 27, 2011

Opening the fourth box



It surprised me that it was colored,
colored blue, in fact, I had never
considered that it might even have
a color, or if did, it would be
a rainbow, but no, it was a
sky blue of different shades, rounded
and soft in places but with a jagged
edge, too, like a sharpened dagger
aimed at what, hearts? At its center,
for it had one of those, too, were
three interlocked boxes, three in one,
and a fourth box off to the side, like
but separate, the only box I was
allowed to open, to find a sky blue
mirror edged in a sky blue flame.
And a voice called it faith.

This poem is submitted to the Poetics prompt at dVerse Poets – what invisible (yet real) thing might you see with a third eye. To see more poems, please visit dVerse Poets.

Photograph: Abstract Blue by Michael Meilen via Public Domain Pictures. Used with permission.

19 comments:

  1. Ooh... I LOVE this one, Glen. Faith is undescribable, but you did great with it.

    http://lkkolp.wordpress.com/2011/08/27/sos-from-the-grave/

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  2. sky blue and limitless with possibilities eh? three boxes and one off to the side i can open...really nice touches to this glynn...

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  3. i like the art before we see any text and the bits about blue in the story, and i like the nifty ending.

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  4. wow - i like how you made faith visible for us..and in such a way i really think i can run my hand across the screen and feel it on my finger tips

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  5. I love this--ascribing the color blue to faith. And why not? Clever write, Glynn.

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  6. I like this metaphor - it works well as a concept - nice exploration of idea

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  7. I too enjoyed the undergirding of the work, building a strong poem.

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  8. Superby super write on faith. Yes, I wouldn't have guessed blue either. Kept me reading. Excellent job.

    http://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2011/08/27/yet-still/

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  9. Love this Glynn! I too see blue, the sky blue of a late summer afternoon...wonderful write, wonderful faith! Thank you...

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  10. This makes me want to open that box too, Glynn! Blue is a very nice thing to unwrap. And there is something about looking up...

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  11. The voice of faith is a wonderful voice, specially when we don't know or are not sure of the real "colours" of boxes, people and events.

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful gem ~

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  12. I took the trip with you. The sky and the sea can be blue on blue.

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  13. One of your most intriguing, Glynn. Its beauty keeps pulling me back..

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  14. Love this, as everyone said it felt so "right"..as though we have never known but has always known this. I love when I am presented with this kind of truth. It restores a little bit of something, faith perhaps, that I thought was lost. Lovely!

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  15. This is amazing...deeply moving. A gift. Thank you Glynn.

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  16. inside the box
    was many blue
    berries
    very juicy
    and merry
    bursts of
    sweet flavor
    to knock off
    one's socks

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  17. Nice plunge into the metaphysical, using the symbols adroitly, as always.

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  18. Very nice Glynn, love the boxes - blue and finding find - edged mirror blue flame...Love the progession and promise of the piece...bkm

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  19. I know I should be content with the faith you found in the fourth box, but part of me wants to know what was in the three interlocking boxes. But, content I shall be. Very nice. Peace, Linda

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