Friday, July 20, 2012

Fire on the Lake



Rose petals fall among
tumbleweeds of dust blowing
into crevices, splitting
my imagination.

I saw fire on the lake flaring,
flat stones skimming
the reflections of flame dissolving
then refocusing.

I want to rhyme, she said.
I want to rhyme with dust,
not roses.

I reach for a bottle
of something but it’s empty,
consumed the night I saw
fire on the lake.

Seth Haines has a writing prompt Thursday – two different videos of the same song. Technically, we’re supposed to write something and submit it to Seth, but I decided to go ahead and post the poem I wrote here.

5 comments:

  1. good to see softer grip on the reign...

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  2. Whoa, Glynn. You dominated that prompt. Good work. Love it.

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  3. Love this...

    "I want to rhyme, she said.
    I want to rhyme with dust,
    not roses."

    Hey, I love the white background. If you put brown-ish where that blue is, it'll match your book so nicely. :)

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  4. Looking forward to owning a book of your poetry one of these days!

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  5. I like how I get something new from this poem with each reading.

    Blessings.

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