This article was originally published at
The Master’s Artist.
In
2003, Cyra Dumitru published a volume of poetry entitled Listening
to Light: Voice Poems. The poems are divided into three sections: the
first in about Adam and Eve, and Cain and Abel; the second is about the
Egyptian gods Isis and Osiris; and the third is about the characters of the
gospel story – Mary, Mary Magdalene, Jesus, Peter, Judas and Joseph, among
others.
While
all of the poems are about “myths” (in the sense of archetypal stories), they
have one thing in common – Dumitru focuses our attention on the flesh-and-blood
people who are Adam and Eve, Cain and Abel, Jesus and Judas. (I’m reminded of
Anne Rice’s “Christ the Lord” books – Out
of Egypt and The
Road to Cana.)
She
does what can be done well with poetry – forcing us to consider Biblical
characters in three dimensions, as individuals with recognizable hopes, dreams,
problems and challenges. We see more humanity here than we’re used to reading.
And the effect is immediate – we understand these characters as recognizable,
and we experience Mary’s visit by the angel and Judas and his betrayal as
events happening just as if we ourselves were the characters involved. Consider
the dilemma Mary’s mother faces with her daughter:
Mary’s Mother
What
does a mother do with such a daughter?
She’s
not interested in marriage, having children.
Says
she’s too busy listening to God.
I’ve
watched Mary sit with her back against a fig tree,
eyes
shining, fixed on somewhere I can’t see.
For
hours she sits heedless to flies, dust, heavy sun.
Then
suddenly she stands, shakes herself
breathes
deeply and opens
her
arms to the fading light.
When
she embraces me
sparks
flow from her fingers
down
my arms and back.
I
am afraid for Mary.
She
speaks f hearing a voice deep within
of
seeing angels at the well.
I
tremble because I believe her
but
I am only a poor woman
who
sees the way men look at her.
Judas
and his betrayal become familiar not because the story is familiar but because
we can see ourselves in his place: “Before his greatness my spirit shrinks. /
The others speak of God’s voice enlarging them. / Inside me – silence. / His
radiance – shadow…”
My
favorite poem in the collection is “Joseph Recalls.” Joseph is one the pivotal
characters in the story of the birth of Jesus, and yet we know so little about
him. Dumitru positions him as remembering Jesus – we don’t know whether it’s
before or after the crucifixion (presumably before) but it is clearly a time
when Joseph knows he is unlikely to see Jesus again. He recalls what happened
the day Jesus laid down his hammer and told Joseph “It is time now / for me to
build / a house within / for God.” Joseph knows it is true as soon as Jesus
utters the words and understands the sacrifice that is to come. And then Joseph
says:
I
have always
felt
his light
see
it streaking
the
grain
of
this table
he
made as a boy.
It
is all
I
have
left
of him.
One
feels the pain of a father who has physically lost a son, a son he raised and
trained, a son he knew was destined for other things.
It
is this poignancy that tears at our hearts, that helps us understand that these
Bible characters are people like ourselves. Poetry can help do that.
Photograph by Lynn Greyling via Public
Domain Pictures. Used with Permission.
Thank you for posting this, Glynn. I don't recall reading it when it was at Master Artist. I love how Dumitru uses verse to create a wholly familiar narrative seen through new eyes.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful poems! Another book for my wish list . . .
ReplyDeleteThanks, Glynn!
flesh
ReplyDeleteblood
bones
beginnings
and nerve endings