buried in the weeds;
we
found the boat above the sea
covered in debris.
A
giant wave had lifted it
high up into the trees;
the
boat had floated down the line
and rested in the weeds.
Eons
of time had come and gone
and men had done their deeds;
while
through all time the boat had sat,
filled with nature’s seeds.
No
path to walk to find the boat
hidden in the weeds;
pure
chance, perhaps, caused us to slip
among the slender reeds.
We
placed our hands upon its bow
and dragged it from the weeds;
we
tore our clothes to make its sail
far from the thick debris.
We
sewed our clothes to make it sail
upon a glassy sea;
we
watched the boat sail from the shore
toward the open sea,
toward the open sea.
On
Saturday, Eileen Knowles over at The Scenic Route had a post entitled “Romancing the
Heart of Stone.” This line caught my attention: “Beauty awakens by romance.”
The
post included a video by Rend Collective, a group that have been around for a
fe years, but this my first experience with their music. I loved the song, and
Eileen’s post plus the song gave birth to the poem above – old-fashioned, to be
sure, and rather reeking of the 19th century. But it was great fun
to write.
The
poem is dedicated to Eileen.
Photograph by Petr Kratochvil via Public Domain Pictures. Used with permission
Just discovered your website via Twitter and like it very much. I am especially interested in poetry with a Christian perspective and try to write some myself. Love the boat poem. I think it is well done. I know there are journals that look for traditional rhyming poetry. Do you submit to print (or online) journals?
ReplyDeleteAh...a boat, the salt, the wind, the sea. I had to show up. Well done matey
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness! Thank you, Glynn. You are not going to believe this...but as I was reading your poem the image of that boat from the video popped into my brain! In the back of my mind I thought..."I wonder if that's where the inspiration came from? THEN I read the ending! Your word are beautiful!
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