Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Matins/Lauds


The cold seeps from
stone to bone, a chill
at this darkest hour,
this deep shadow time
of night, uncertainty
of soul, uneasiness
of mind, resistance
of blanketed body.

In the darkness a soul
finds its hole, its hole
in the night, aperture
of hope and expectation.

An eyelid opens; a gleam
reaches toward a pinpoint
of light. A soul follows,
seeking the reality it knows
is there. Darkness softens,
the soul begins a tone,
a chord, a bar, moving
to a slight song, knowing
a symphony is waiting.

This poem is submitted to Open Link Night at d’Verse Poets Pub, a new online poetry publication officially launched today. To see other poems submitted, please visit d’Verse Poets. The links will be live at 2 p.m. Central time today.

Photograph: Daybreak by Teodoro Gruhl via Public Domain Pictures. Used with permission.

27 comments:

  1. glynn you spin a tender pen...i rather like the awakening in that last stanza...happy tuesday

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  2. calm to awake.. a beautiful movement this is.

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  3. Nice evocation of the shaking off of night, perhaps restless dream, into not-quite morning and finally praise for another day come.

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  4. I loved your use of aperature with its possibility for expansion.

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  5. You've transported back to the days when this was part of my lifestyle. So glad to find your blog, Glynn. Victoria

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  6. I like the "aperture of hope and expectation" and the following of the soul...really nice piece!!

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  7. Another beautiful poem Glynn. Always a joy to visit here.

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  8. How adroitly you start with the dark and slowly bring us into the light; how you start with a hum of a tone and brings us into the full sound of a symphony orchestra. In that fullness we find hope and joy. Thanks Glynn for another great piece and for linking today at a new beginning! Gay

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  9. From dark to light what a beautiful journey you take us on !

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  10. From darkness to light, a mundane journey we make every day, and yet so seldom hear the music it truly is, playing softly, then with clear emphasis in this lyrical piece.

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  11. There is always the hope for a new day isn't there my friend? one of those days there will be a magnificent symphony playing ...

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  12. {{sigh}} What a beautiful awakening! So lovely, Glynn! And that I love the photo! Blessings to you!

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  13. you have brought so much
    in such a delicately worded way
    echoing through time

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  14. ...aperture of hope.


    Yummy! Loved that.

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  15. An opening song...great opening night music for the poet's pub....encore please...encore....bkm

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  16. I love the thought of the symphony waiting...sounds safe and peaceful

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  17. While I know I am repeating what other's have said, and I have said before... How lovely!

    Truly lovely!

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  18. Oh, i love the ending of this...
    tomorrow morning I'm going to hit the snooze button a few times in honor of this beautiful expression of waking. If I stay in bed long enough, I'll hear a symphony all right... but it will sound more like children's voices. =)

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  19. Wonderful transition from darkness to hope, to expectations of beauty.

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  20. "Darkness softens,
    the soul begins a tone,
    a chord, a bar, moving
    to a slight song, knowing
    a symphony is waiting."

    Such hope at the end. Very nice!

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  21. Wonderful lines.. Glynn,..
    Loved the lines

    "Darkness softens,
    the soul begins a tone,
    a chord, a bar, moving
    to a slight song, knowing
    a symphony is waiting."

    And we all know there is symphony wwaiting for us

    Divya
    (www.divyasachdeva.blog.com)

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  22. So a beautiful lightening. Wonderful emotions minced in your soulful writing.

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  23. the night watches welcome a soulful reflection...and projection for a new day. I am glad you aren't afraid of the dark. Nice.

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  24. From ominous to joyful, great share!

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  25. The great unwrapping of a new awakening, layer by layer, door by door. Wonderfully rendered, Glynn.

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