Monday, October 24, 2011

Beneath a surface


A placid surface
an expressionless face
a perfunctory smile (Sunday smile)
a drawn curtain
an ebb tide
a portrait, idealized
a shallow conversation

to disguise, to hide

hurt, pain, destruction
anguish, panic, fear
the difficulties that are
this world we know
this life we live
each day

alone

This poem is submitted to the Warrior Poet Circle hosted by Jason Stasyszen. Today’s prompt is “difficulties.” To see more poems submitted, please visit Connecting to Impact.

Photograph: Sunrise by the lake by Bora Bora via Public Domain Pictures. Used with permission.

5 comments:

  1. so often this is how we live. I wonder why. why we are so afraid to be real.

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  2. That image offers such interesting perspective. Looked at one way, it seems as though the figure is on a cliff edge, though we know it's shore edge, the water reflecting the sky. The stillness of the water hides the turbulence below, what your poem speaks to. The disguise brings its own pain; and, as we eventually come to understand, the disguise is flimsy, the reality usually quite obvious even to those we think we're hiding from.

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  3. It must break God's heart that He gives everything for us to be with Him and we miss it and spend so much time pretending when really we're alone. Great poem and thanks for participating, Glynn.

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  4. above the surface

    the curtain has been torn
    breaking the surface
    we see our sinful self
    our life
    in the darkness
    we know who we are
    no need to hide
    from the light
    walk in the light
    see our sinful nature
    no need to hide
    our ragamuffin self
    no need to hide
    our Love of God
    our need
    for all our Love and
    all Glory goes to our Savior
    the King
    we are no longer lost
    no longer apart
    no longer alone
    rise from beneath
    shake the placid surface
    feel the living water
    know the pain and destruction
    the anguish, and hurt
    of this life
    from it He was not spared
    we know his Love is in all
    no need to hide
    take up your cross
    and follow

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