Friday, October 28, 2011

She asks



The words slip
from her ruby lips
like small, perfect
pearls: prove your
love; bring me
cashmere.

I have armies march,
wars waged,
diplomats barter,
thieves steal,
thousands, tens
of thousands die.

I bring her
proof of my love.
And she stares.
I asked, she said,
for cashmere;
not Kashmir.

L.L. Barkat heard Thursday from an advertising agency in Berlin, who ran across one of our TweetSpeak poetry jam poems on cashmere – and wants to use it in an advertisement or catalog. And they’re interested in poems about cashmere. So I got inspired. I’m not sure if this is exactly what they’re looking for, however. Check the T.S. Poetry Press Facebook page to see if anyone else got lured into writing a cashmere poem.

Painting: Cashmere by John Singer Sargent (1908); in the collection of Bill Gates. The painting is of Singer’s niece, wearing a cashmere shawl in nine different poses. 

11 comments:

  1. iLove cashmere. It is never too cold. It is never too hot. It is always just right, like the baby bear's porridge. Year round.

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  2. Glynn! this is terrific; the beginning so romantic, the twist at the end. You did get... inspired :)

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  3. Ha! On the first day of the prompt, my true love gave to me...one Kashmir goat...

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  4. Never...
    i say NEVER
    let a man
    go
    shopping for you.

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  5. I'm wearing a purple cashmere wrap as I type.

    And you are clever. Very clever!

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  6. Loved this, Glynn. So well done. And I third the 'clever, very clever' motion. Thanks.

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  7. Love the twist woven into your final lines! And I add my voice to the chorus, "Clever, very clever!"

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  8. This poem has been with all day. It's engaging and funny and terrifying all at the same time. It dramatizes how differently men and women think.

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