Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Feeding koi



Flashes, splashes of gold
orange yellow white black
punctuated by plaintive
open mouths, jostling
and competing for bits
of compacted pellets
(25 cents per serving)
(what a deal) (even if of
unknown nutritional value)
delighting both a child
and the child within.

This poem is submitted for Open Link Night at dVerse Poets. The links will be live at 2 p.m. Central time today.

Photograph: Grandfather and grandson feeding koi at St. Louis Union Station, April 8, 2012, by Stephanie Young.

12 comments:

  1. That's a good grandpa right there...and not a bad tie to boot!

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  2. Noting sweeter than the relationship between a grandfather and his grandson...

    that's a blessing that only God could give.

    :-)

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  3. Just how long is that tie, Glynn?!

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  4. "...both a child and the child within."

    :-)

    delightful

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  5. smiles...they have this at smith mountain lake...and still love to feed the fish and looks like you had a nice partner as well..smiles.

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  6. The best part of grandkids(besides themselves of course) is that you get to be a kid again, and you're old enough not to be embarrassed by it. Nice one, Glynn.

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  7. What a seething mass :-)
    I wonder what a young lad would make of that.

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  8. Fun poem. Reminds me of visits to our botanical garden where there is a lake with koi.

    http://poemblaze.wordpress.com

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  9. So darling... your grandson. He looks like you. =) Beautiful capture... the child and the child within. Such a blessing to have a grandpa with quarters in his pocket.

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  10. There's a lot of love in this photo!

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