Saturday, July 7, 2012

Red Wind



The fires moves down, down
from the mountains, down
through the center of my soul,
streaking the inner darkness
with golden yellows, glowing
if not illuminating, burning
stone and soil, sucking oxygen
as the red wind consumes
my paper skin

sparks and flares, thousands
of tiny lightning strikes move,
speed, feed on the combustible
carrion of my mind,
borne on the red wind,
born of the red wind

my throat is dry parchment
my forehead a fever of fire
raining, uncontainable


This poem is submitted for the Whatever the Weather prompt at dVerse Poets. To see more submitted poems, please visit the site.

15 comments:

  1. dang...fire can be vicious, consuming everything...scary as well as it is hard to contain once it gets out....nice internalization of this as well...def evokes feeling...

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  2. the red wind consumes
    my paper skin...this is such an intense image..an out of control fire, no matter if a real or metaphorical one is def. a scary thing..

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  3. Glenn- this is such a wonderful metaphor...the fire raging through a body.

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  4. Tremendously descriptive and lyrical, Glynn!
    Blessings!

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  5. This is exactly what I'm talking about....embodying the weather as emotion and feeling. Whilst on face value- this is or could be about someone watching a forest fire (very real and scary in the US at the moment)...it actually goes much deeper than that.....rage, lack of control.....felt this one for sure

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  6. I like the vivid capture of the fire, red wind consuming paper skin ~ Great write ~

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  7. the hot fires of summer... devastating to whom it consumes

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  8. burning and feeding on the dead body yet bringing life to the soul.

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  9. or possibly a fever out of control ...

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  10. The sort of red wind that is the stuff of nightmares - powerful

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  11. Holy Spirit. . .

    Great poem. . . a lot to think about.

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  12. feed on the combustible
    carrion of my mind,

    This poem embraces us all....

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  13. Forest fires can be life threatening. It certainly presents an eerie pic!

    Hank

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  14. these fiery words are
    embers, still glowing, blown
    away to burn more golden
    streaks in another's
    inner darkness

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