Silver
shiny metal
in
black leather holsters
and
thin strips of dotted paper
we
called caps that promised
to
explode if hit precisely right
We
were the wild west
in
fenced suburban yards
where
it was safe
to
be the wild west
Swing
sets were our forts
or
encircled wagon trains;
we
practiced being shot
and
falling over safely dead
until
the family dog sniffed
our
ears and moms called
dinnertime
and served up the grub
We
were Roy Rogers and Gene Autrey
and
Ben Cartwright and the Rifleman
and
Matt Dillon and Rawhide
and
the masked man known only
as
Kemosabe and the masked man
from
Mexico dressed in black
and
carving Z everywhere
We
remade the small screen
remade
the large screen
remade
the Caitlins and the Bodmers
and
the Remingtons and grainy photographs
and
kept the myth alive, the dream alive,
until
we matured and became
Butch
Cassidy and the Sundance Kid
until
we matured more and used
light
sabers and had sidekicks
named
Chewbacca
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Painting: A Dash for the Timber (1889) by
Frederic Remington.
13 comments:
ha. you def brought back memories with this one...we used to chase each other around with cap guns...making forts....oh yeah...smiles.
A nostalgic creation. Nice play of words.
Oh, yes, how we've morphed! I remember so fondly playing those wild west games; yes, girls can play, too! Remember Annie Oakley? :)
Beautiful poem as always, Glynn, and it brought back such wonderful memories for me.
Blessings!
Glynn thank you for this! What a great nostalgic cowboy poetic tribute to the cowboy heroes of our youth. The only difference between myself and your friends is we used real horses! :-) Thanks for joining in.
I had forgotten about Z - the mark of Zorro. Used to love that television program. You really have tweaked my memories with all of these heroes I used to enjoy watching week after week!
i like how at the end you acknowledge that Star Wars is really a cowboy/space-opera and not sci fi ans people seem to think, show don't really know sci fi
Midnight Cowboy — A Quick Review
We were the wild west
in fenced suburban yards
back in the day, when kids NEW how to play.
Ha! Love how you ended this! Those were the days...
Oh yes. Recall those western series being an inspiration to our games - great memories here
Now, THIS is "The real McCoy"!!
Impressive writing and a touching reminiscing into the bargain.
Ah, yes this all rang true for me. As well as the paper cap guns, I did have a phase with a spud gun, but somehow chasing around with a potato in my hand just didn't feel cool.
who didn't have a pair of boots and hat... now it's capes and masks
Great play on the imagination of children running wild..the backyard alive with magic.
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