Thursday, March 4, 2010

I Saw a Man, Walking


I saw a man, walking.
Not tall or short; not
fat or thin; no distinct
features, but
a shining blur, a
luminous presence. He
called to me, that
blur, that presence; his
hand, shimmering like
sunlit glass,
reached toward me.
Slowly my hand extended; I
reached to that shimmer and
saw the mirror, a darkness
surrounded by fire,
consumed by light.

I saw a man, standing.


Photograph by nAncY of Poems and Prayers. Used with permission.

8 comments:

  1. Very nice. I enjoyed the imagery and the feeling--it really has a depth to it beyond the initial surface reading.

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  2. Sounds like Someone mixed spit and dirt, put mud on your eyes so you could finally see. Fortunate man.

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  3. interesting transition from walking to standing ...

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  4. That picture is seriously cool. How did nAncY do that?

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  5. Glynn,
    I like the reaching out to the shimmer.

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