I
write in what I believe is a plain style, influenced by the courses I took in
college for my journalism degree and a few decades of working in corporate
communications. It’s called “news style,” and it’s allergic to the vast
majority of adjectives and adverbs.
This
puts me in an interesting position when it comes to Christian fiction. Most (not
all but most) Christian fiction is written for women readers. The reason is
simple: women buy most of the Christian fiction that’s published. They are the market.
They also like adjectives and adverbs. They like the atmosphere created with
adjectives and adverbs.
How
Sweet the Sound,
the debut novel by Amy Sorrells, is Christian fiction. It has adjectives and
adverbs. And atmosphere. And drama – by the end of chapter three, we have an
incestuous rape and two brothers shooting each other to death.
I
wasn’t sure if this was the book for me. But Sorrells is a good writer (I’ve
read her articles and posts for a number of years), she is a fine storyteller,
and so I kept reading. And suddenly, for me, everything changed. How Sweet the Sound moved from a work of
Christian fiction to an absorbing story. I forgot that I was reading a “Christian
novel.” And one character unlocked the story for me.
The
Harlan family lives in coastal Alabama on a long-family-owned plantation. The
main crop they raise is pecans. They are a presence in the community. They have
standing. They are also close to completely dysfunctional.
The
story opens at Thanksgiving dinner, presided over by Vaughn Harlan and his wife
Princella. Their children Rey and Comfort are there; Rey is married to Oralee
and has one child, Anniston, who is the novel’s primary narrator. Their
half-brother Cole shows up late and obnoxious; Cole is the child of Princella
and a college football player who wouldn’t marry her when she became pregnant.
Comfort and her boyfriend Solly Daniels announce their engagement, and it is
that announcement that sets the family into a rapid downward spiral.
By
early the next morning, Cole has raped his half-sister Comfort and he and Rey
have shot each other to death.
The
brothers are buried; Comfort goes into self-enforced isolation, cutting herself
all from contact with anyone, including Solly. The story begins to alternate
between Anniston and Comfort as narrators. Comfort doesn’t believe she can marry Solly;
Anniston is bereft of her father. Oralee has lost her husband; Princella has
lost both of her sons but is truly mourning only Cole, the blackguard. The sense of loss
becomes almost overpowering.
And
then Anniston meets Jedidiah (Jed) Manon, hired by her grandfather to help work in
the pecan groves. Jed is a year older than Anniston. He’s a foster child,
placed with a couple who lived in a trailer in town. He’s been bounced around
the foster care system. He has a bad eye and walks with a limp. In spite of his
handicaps and a string of bad, abusing families (including the current one), Jed
has risen above the problems of his life and become an intelligent, engaging
young man.
Jed
has what none of the Harlans do – he has hope.
I
have rarely been as taken with a character in a novel as I was taken by Jed. He
captured the story for me. He is what the novel is ultimately about – hope,
rising above circumstances, and redemption of even the worst of the characters.
How Sweet the Sound is a good
story. Sorrells tells it well (I got over my feelings for adjectives and
adverbs, and most of that is for setting the stage at the novel’s beginning). She
tells it true. And in Jed Manon, she’s created a character who will stay with
me for a long time.
3 comments:
Hi Glynn! Wow, thank you so much for 1) reading my novel and 2) reviewing it! You truly made my day. It made me a little teary that Jed is your favorite--he's my favorite too. I'm so grateful my girl prose didn't get in the way of you meeting him. Blessings to you, and huge thanks!
Wow! This sounds so like Faulkner with his dark, brooding families filled to the brim with dysfunction. I'll try to read this soon!
Thanks so much, Glynn!
Actually, the plot sounds a lot like David (Bible) and his dysfunctional family--Tamar, Absalom, Amnon.
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