Showing posts with label beginning. Show all posts
Showing posts with label beginning. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 16, 2022

When You Face Too Many Ways to Open a Novel


How many openings can a novel have? Let me count the ways. 

I’d never experienced the problem of too many ways to open a novel. Five novels, and five fairly straightforward beginnings, meant that I never struggled over how to open a story. Somehow, I always knew, and it wasn’t an issue.

 

Until now.

 

I began to write the draft like I always had. I had an idea, and image, in my mind, and that’s how I’d start the story. I wrote it. I read it over several times. It seemed to work. I started writing beyond the opening, and I bogged down. 

 

Something seemed slightly off, and I knew it was the opening. So, I reworked it. And reworked it. I revised it to the point where it was almost unrecognizable from the first version. It still didn’t work. I discarded it and started over. I tried something entirely different. At one point, I thought I had it, finally, only to realize I didn’t. I went back to the first and tried it again.

 

To continue reading, please see my post today at ACFW

 

Photograph by Ankhesenamun via Unsplash. Used with permission.

Sunday, November 11, 2018

Made in fear


After Psalm 139:13-16

Made in fear, and wonder,
a work full of wonder molded
in intricate design, woven
in the depths of the earth,
an unformed substance before
the spirit hovered, with each day
already formed, already written,
planned and designed with purpose
and intent, created in the image,
a physical essence, a soul, a heart,
a mind crafted in the image, to be
a bearer of the image.

Photograph by Alex Hockett via Unsplash. Used with permission.