Sunday, January 9, 2011

Creative Destruction

Sky, sea merge
into fiery red;
sands gray, green,
kaleidoscope into color,
absorbing, swallowing,
trumpet blast,
siren call
of final shadows.
Time cracks open
at sunset;
day of destruction
becomes one flesh
with day of creation.

This poem is submitted for One Shot Sunday, hosted by One Stop Poetry. To see more poems prompted by the photograph (and an interview with the photographer), please visit One Stop Poetry.

Photograph by K.J. Halliday; used with permission via One Shoot Sunday at One Stop Poetry.


dustus said...

"Time cracks open / at sunset;" Can interpret those 5 words in a few ways. Given the context, creates a powerful effect to the "day of creation." Interesting addition of sounds that add poignant layers of meaning. Thanks for taking the challenge, Glynn!

Claudia said...

glynn i loved the line..Time cracks open at sunset..this does sth. with my heart

Louise Gallagher said...

You've done it again, cracked upon my heart with your words.

Powerful poem Glynn -- so suited to the imagery. It reads red.

Jerry said...

Cued up for me the cyclical nature of life. Seasons churning, turning, never without hope, never without cutting edges. Keep em coming. You stir my tanks(selfishly saying...)

hedgewitch said...

Great feel of the primordial here, Glynn. I would have said the blue cold ocean was the antithesis of this image, yet you worked it into a flowing sequence that very effectively unites the parts into an over-riding whole. Very nicely done indeed.

Fireblossom said...

Ay. A girl goes out for a loaf of bread and walks straight into Arma-freakin-geddon. Sheesh!

... Paige said...

time cracks open at sunset

super image

Jenne' R. Andrews said...

like shay-- i felt and saw Armageddon reading this-- the heart of the matter, and don't we all live many armageddons a day? xxxj

Unknown said...

'siren call
of final shadows'

makes me think of a favorite...C.S. Lewis' 'The Great Divorce'

I love where you went with it, and what it brings out about the image!

MTJ said...

Hi Glynn,

"Sky, sea merge
into fiery red...Time cracks open
at sunset;

The image and opening words remind me of volcanic activity, something violent and unusal interrupting the normal course of the day.

Thanks for sharing your poetry and picture.

Blessings and peace.


Anonymous said...

time cracks open